On Writing an Easter Poem
On Writing an Easter Poem
I watch women,
men, girls
come to the table
with eggs— fuschia, lemon,
baby blue. They write of
redemption in thin shells,
and all I can do is open
my mouth like a teenaged
boy who's looking for
his voice and finds...
it cracks.
Eggs in Gallery photo by L.L. Barkat.
Labels: easter poetry, National Poetry Month, random acts of poetry
35 Comments:
His voice may crack
but at least it's
not scrambled.
I like this very much. And that ending!
If you never wrote another one, this would be the crown jewel. My oh my girl.
yes it is the words cracking that is so difficult
and how our lives crack at times ...
Yup yup. Heather Truett and Madame Rubies are one and the same. :)
I love this, especially the use of the word "cracked."
Absolutely delighted that you stopped by.
I'm also a longterm admirer of Annie Dillard. I've read The Writing Life and loved it. (Couldn't help sneaking over to your side bar to read a couple of favorite posts.)
I'd like to write like Annie, too.
:-)
This is a delightfully surprising one! You are so clever and amazingly creative.
Have a blessed Easter!
This is perfect. :)
I love, love, love this poem! And I'll stop there since I think the point is not to over-analyze. :-)
Here's my RAP for the week: http://evenifiambeingpoured.blogspot.com/2010/04/sycamore-snow.html
sweet baby blue
(:
I was surprised at your last line - you made me re-read. I love it!
Here is my RAP:
"Rebirth (or, the beauty in the perpetuation of weeds)
I hope you have a good Easter. Thanks for your note in my comment box last night. I very much appreciated your understanding...
You crack me up.... in a really, really good way!
Brilliant.
...love-laced.
Very much feeling my "thin shell" today.
Thanks for the prompt. You're always a source of inspiration. Thank you.
http://phoenix-karenee.blogspot.com/2010/04/following-l-l-barkat.html
Oh you do have a way... :-) Easter blessings to you!
Oh, I dunno if you meant for this.. but, I laughed at the end of the poem.
You're always surprising me with your knitting of words. I like... :)
Popped in to say, "Happy Easter!", Laura!
Dropping by my RAP-- http://tfgpoetry.wordpress.com/2010/04/04/called-forth/
What a way
to say
"Happy Easter!"
(complete with
adolescent
voice-cracks)
I pulled out my poem from your comments section. Here it is in its own place:
http://writingwithoutpaper.blogspot.com/2010/04/sore-chasing-dreams-poem.html
I love the surprise at the end!
Here is my RAP-- which I found more difficult than I would have thought:
http://daily-portion.blogspot.com/2010/04/morning-nine-years-later.html
Not sure where to 'drop' this poem your blog inspired me to write -- so I'm dropping it here too!
Love the how to write a poem!
http://recoveryourjoy.blogspot.com/2010/04/river-deep.html
For the poetry prompt. Thank you for the starting point L.L. http://inthezeitgeist.wordpress.com/2010/04/05/lesson-from-the-subway-guy/
a RAP from a random poet of sorts:
//////
splendid.
as always.
My random act is posted: http://growupdeep.blogspot.com/2010/04/unsweet.html
Thanks!
Here is my link for the RAP prompt:
http://aspiretoleadaquietlife.blogspot.com/2010/04/odd-one-out.html
Blessings.
L L Barkat reminds me
Of the value of writing poetry.
I used to write poetry.
Haven’t done much lately.
Why?
No time to fly!
So busy getting dinner,
Trying to keep my diet thinner,
Dishing out some history,
Seeking more of life’s mystery.
But perhaps for me,
Living the life I CAN-MUST DO-BE
Has the same value as writing poetry.
here's my link to an Easter poem for Random Acts of Poetry
http://kingfishercrossing.blogspot.com/2010/04/he-is-risen-lord-is-risen-indeed.html
wow! 31 comments... will you even get here... well, the poem is brilliant of course! oh the things that crack! : )
It's Thursday the 8th! Here's the link to my RAP:
http://mybigthree.highcallingblogs.com/2010/04/08/closure/
Fun!
Way fun. I laughed out loud.
My RAP contribution
http://greatbrainidea.wordpress.com/2010/04/08/throwing-a-pot/
I don't know if this is what you were looking for.
But I do know your gentle encouragement was appreciated the last time.
At last I have it! :)
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