Tuesday, December 21, 2010

Adventing, Still

Grand Central Terminal

Sunday Eve

Mountains blue
ripple our horizon
above the river sleeping;
ribbons silken trim the sky
amethyst, pearl, gold,
as if the earth
was readying to greet
the baby we've been

This poem is offered for One Shot Wednesday.

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Blogger Maureen said...

Lyrical, lovely, luminous.

8:38 AM  
Blogger David Rupert said...

I went out to see the full eclipse night and thought about the word "luminous" and then you used it this morning.

9:19 AM  
Blogger Sarah said...

Simply scrumptious.

Have a joy filled, love overflow Christmas,

9:30 AM  
Blogger Louise Gallagher said...

This is lovely. And luminous as Marueen said.

Like it lots!

9:33 AM  
Blogger SimplyDarlene said...

I clicked the image for a closer look. Grand Central Station--that about sums it up.

What a pairing of words and image.


10:22 AM  
Blogger Kelly Sauer said...

I took Piper to look at Christmas lights last night, and we found one creche that was missing a baby. I'd not really considered Advent until last year, when you all talked so much about the wait...

This is beautiful.

1:36 PM  
Blogger Beachanny said...

A lovely Christmas present not beneath the tree but hung on OneStopPoetry..reflecting the season. Come by http://beachanny.blogspot.com for my Christmas poem too. Thanks.

10:55 PM  
Blogger KB said...

Beautifully done.

1:43 AM  
Blogger dustus said...

In addition to the spiritual aspect and references, "Seedlings in Stone" makes me recall the Blue Ridge Mountains. Fine lyrical quality throughout the poem. Merry Christmas.

10:00 AM  
Blogger Michelle DeRusha said...

You bring me peace.

5:27 PM  
Blogger One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artists said...

this is beautifully written...the use and choice of colour was excellent...all the best and enjoy the christmas festivities...pete

11:47 AM  

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