The Color of Things
I have been writing more poetry lately. Apologies to my non-poetry friends :)
On a Tuesday Leaving
You think you know
the color of things— a maple
in the back yard is gray rivers
where gray squirrels go boating
towards a blue bay...
then the world turns,
you want to run into the house,
pull somebody off the couch,
drag him (her) to see that the maple
isn't gray at all, and red squirrels
are racing to tips of bright arteries,
bleeding towards the end of day.
Girl in the Orange Coat photo, by L.L. Barkat.
Labels: poetry
18 Comments:
This makes me happy. Love.
oh, wonder.
you and your poetry.
poetry
and
who doesn't
the world
like
turns
poetry
Your poetry makes my heart sing.
Your poetry makes my world turn in technicolor.
Nice. It makes me happy too.
never apologise for poetry! :-)
Love this poem - love how the world can turn and stun us with its change. Love the colours. Love their beauty or perhaps their threat. Love how you want to drag someone else into the sudden wonder of it. Love the whole concept of a world turning.
amazing how the world comes alive when we see ...
love the arteries-- the maples here breathtaking-- (Colorado)-- xxj
Makes me smile. I would come and look at the maple with you! And that coat! Marvelous photo. The orange seems to be reflected on the road in front of her.
I love this one, L.L. Thank you for the picture of beauty here in the darkness of day's end.
I've been thinking about color lately. What if we were in just a black and white world? And why shouldnt we have one? It's almost as if God is showing off -- giving us color to tell us of His wonder and to help us appreciate Him even more...
LOVE the photo and the imagery in your poem. You captured simple joy in both. Delightful.
LL, you have a 'corner' on poetry no one else can compare. Practically a trademark. I could read yours without your name attached and know it's yours. Never apologize for writing poetry!!! WRITE MORE.
i just love this so much ...
Oh my word. This is gorgeous!
This is beautiful -- words and picture.
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